Novel #9 - Arvon Day 4

A much more focussed day. I rewrote the synopsis and killed off a character. She annoyed me, anyway. I also rewrote the first chapter. The novel is starting to take shape more clearly in my head, and I'm starting to understand that the linear timeline, scene by scene,  is the only way that I can make it work. 

After a busy morning, I  felt I had earned another walk through the valley to the waterfalls. Photos below.